Introduction: From my
point of view, Spain have not an effective way to teaching our students, especially
in high school, and it is easy to realize it because of the achieved results in
comparison with the students of other countries in the whole world.
Conclusion: In summary,
due to the results that our students have been obtained in the last years,
education in Spain should be renew and the government should investigate the
problem that our model is suffering nowadays. Thus, if we do not do it now, we
will face up the serious consequences that it is going to provoke in our
society in a near future.
I agree with you.
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Spain does not have an effective education system, especially in high school, and it is easy to realize it in sight of the results achieved in exams, in comparison with the results achieved by students of other countries in the whole world.
Conclusion: In summary, due to the results that our students have obtained in the last years, education in Spain should be renewed and the government should investigate the problem that affects our education system nowadays. If we do not do it now, we will face up the serious consequences that this problem is going to provoke in our society in a near future.
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